Final Stage Touchups
Getting back into my hobbies, I decided yesterday that it’s finally time to finish this painting. I know it’s been a long journey with this piece, and you're probably as tired of seeing it as I am, but the moment has come. Last night, I finally got a solid night of sleep—an 85 on the Garmin scale, my all-time high. I feel at peace mentally and physically, so this feels like the perfect time to bring this painting to completion.
I’ve gone through and marked the areas that need attention. I’ll refer to Van Gogh’s original for guidance, but I want each painting to stand on its own rather than just trying to imitate his work. My goal is to create something that feels balanced and authentic in its own way while still honoring the inspiration behind it.
1. The right side needs to be broken up more, and the swirl should be less pronounced. I’ll use the original as a guide for subtle adjustments.
2. The bottom right requires some restructuring: more blue tones, and a few more flowers on the far right to bring in added texture and depth.
3. The bottom/middle right flowers could use a bit more orange, and they should be slightly larger. This will give the impression of the flowers being closer, more in line with the original piece’s perspective.
4. The central bush should have more color variation and employ brushstrokes inspired by Van Gogh’s style.
5. The olive trees need a stronger presence of olive tones. The trunks need better definition, and the leaves on the right side could use more “tree holes” and outward definition.
6. The bottom left flowers need more orange and should be larger to give them a closer feel.
7. The bushes on the left side feel too flat. I’ll apply more V.G.-inspired brushwork for added texture and liveliness.
After those changes, I’ll be adding sparse color touches throughout the grass area to enhance the diversity of colors. While the first pass went well, I want an even greater variety—subtle touches that catch the eye without overwhelming it. The goal is just a few touches of each color, no more than three per tone, to keep it cohesive.
Wish me luck!
